T.S., I said master and guide
Not to show ingratitude
This is getting to be a long ride
Throught the diabolical latitude
and if I wouldn’t be too remiss
I think it would improve my attitude
To move beyond the circle of this
parliment of flames
And make our way further into Dis
Sure there are a thousand stories a thousand names
No need to talk to any more political types
And Eliot said hey kid nobody blames
You for getting caught up and your gripes
are understandable. We’ll get you movin’ on along right down the pipes
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
Don't need fortune fame respect or speed.
All writings © Jonathan Mark Hamlow 1998-2023
Thursday, November 29, 2007
Wednesday, November 28, 2007
204 : 10/31/98 : Drawn to Flame (Canto 26)
942 : 12 ?
And standing looking back I said America
you’re going to reap the evil that you’ve sewn
And all the time unknowing you’re passing the
point of no return, beyond the pale beyond the known
And maybe it would be a better thing
To lay down and die, the cancer’s only grown
More in more, in spite of all your fighting
All your fury and your sound
But in the end you will worship your king
Of filthy lucre until it drives you in the ground
And having said my piece we moved along
Listened to a rising roaring sound
I can’t express it in a song
The storm of the multitude inferno
A hundred thousand millions souls strong
On the verge of the ditch where the wicked counselors go
Like sparks from the welders arc
Like crystals in a storm of snow
Like fireflies above the water, old Smith Park
Anonymous wrapped in fire all the same
Eliot said souls burn in the eternal dark
Wrapped in the fire that drove them to seek a name
by leading their society into the shadows
Trapped like moths around a candle, drawn to flame
I said look at that strange two headed flame that goes
twisted and turning through the gloom
I watched in wonder as the flames flickered fell and rose
Eliot said wait until that flame looms
close to us and wonder at the sight
Two ancient generals who shared a watery tomb
Two souls burning in the endless night
And we didn’t we didn’t say a word
When the twin flame passed us narrowly on the right
I listened intently but all I heard
Was a silence trapped inside silence that endured
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
And standing looking back I said America
you’re going to reap the evil that you’ve sewn
And all the time unknowing you’re passing the
point of no return, beyond the pale beyond the known
And maybe it would be a better thing
To lay down and die, the cancer’s only grown
More in more, in spite of all your fighting
All your fury and your sound
But in the end you will worship your king
Of filthy lucre until it drives you in the ground
And having said my piece we moved along
Listened to a rising roaring sound
I can’t express it in a song
The storm of the multitude inferno
A hundred thousand millions souls strong
On the verge of the ditch where the wicked counselors go
Like sparks from the welders arc
Like crystals in a storm of snow
Like fireflies above the water, old Smith Park
Anonymous wrapped in fire all the same
Eliot said souls burn in the eternal dark
Wrapped in the fire that drove them to seek a name
by leading their society into the shadows
Trapped like moths around a candle, drawn to flame
I said look at that strange two headed flame that goes
twisted and turning through the gloom
I watched in wonder as the flames flickered fell and rose
Eliot said wait until that flame looms
close to us and wonder at the sight
Two ancient generals who shared a watery tomb
Two souls burning in the endless night
And we didn’t we didn’t say a word
When the twin flame passed us narrowly on the right
I listened intently but all I heard
Was a silence trapped inside silence that endured
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
Monday, November 19, 2007
203 : 10/30/98 : Transformation Proceeds from Within (Canto 25)
933 : 3 ?
The miscreant we faced, hearing my philosophy
answered with both fists middle fingers stretched out
Saying here’s to you and your god and all the sophistry
You don’t know a goddamned thing about
A voice hissed let me handle this one in my ear
A snake slithered over my shoulder and in a flash twined about
This mocker’s neck and mouth and choked off his jeer
and soon was joined by hosts of his scaly kin
they hissed we’ll roll this troublemaker right on out of here
No sooner said they had him rolling like a rolling pin
and we were being accosted by a group of three
One exclaimed where’s Tony? It’s happening again
Before I could ask what his meaning might be
He was confronted by a lizard with too many legs
That reared up an fell upon him instantly
like the black widow having fertilized her eggs
began to tear and devour it’s hapless mate
and he was down upon his knees like one who begs
TS said I think it’s just a little late
for supplication now but I barely heard him
so absorbed was I by the altered state
That over took those strugglers limb by limb
their substance was absorbed into a nasty mass
that sprouted wings and talons like a corrupt seraphim
And what manner of creature came to pass
I don’t really think it has a name
And if I thought that nothing could surpass
This strange transformation, who could blame
me for my terrible surprise
when out of a smoking pit another reptile came
And pegged another of the three direct between the eyes
his eyes crossed a little, but he didn’t say a word
Transformation proceeds from within, so say the wise
said my guide, but seeing that again I scarcely heard
merely stood and watched along with me the terrible
double transformation that then occurred
still lodged firmly in the second sinner’s skull
the lizard thrashed and then began to swell
until it seemed the space inside that damaged head was full
It burst forth and the completion of the spell
formed its body into a golem of the same man he’d assaulted
and in a reversal that surprised me even there in hell
The second reached into the hole in his shattered head
and with fierce tugging pulled away his skin
just as any reptile will its worn skin shed
he shed his human flesh and flashed a lizard’s grin
And to Eliot I said what did your proverb mean
that transformation proceeds from within
he said whether your shell be dirty or clean
the inner man will in the end always be seen
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
The miscreant we faced, hearing my philosophy
answered with both fists middle fingers stretched out
Saying here’s to you and your god and all the sophistry
You don’t know a goddamned thing about
A voice hissed let me handle this one in my ear
A snake slithered over my shoulder and in a flash twined about
This mocker’s neck and mouth and choked off his jeer
and soon was joined by hosts of his scaly kin
they hissed we’ll roll this troublemaker right on out of here
No sooner said they had him rolling like a rolling pin
and we were being accosted by a group of three
One exclaimed where’s Tony? It’s happening again
Before I could ask what his meaning might be
He was confronted by a lizard with too many legs
That reared up an fell upon him instantly
like the black widow having fertilized her eggs
began to tear and devour it’s hapless mate
and he was down upon his knees like one who begs
TS said I think it’s just a little late
for supplication now but I barely heard him
so absorbed was I by the altered state
That over took those strugglers limb by limb
their substance was absorbed into a nasty mass
that sprouted wings and talons like a corrupt seraphim
And what manner of creature came to pass
I don’t really think it has a name
And if I thought that nothing could surpass
This strange transformation, who could blame
me for my terrible surprise
when out of a smoking pit another reptile came
And pegged another of the three direct between the eyes
his eyes crossed a little, but he didn’t say a word
Transformation proceeds from within, so say the wise
said my guide, but seeing that again I scarcely heard
merely stood and watched along with me the terrible
double transformation that then occurred
still lodged firmly in the second sinner’s skull
the lizard thrashed and then began to swell
until it seemed the space inside that damaged head was full
It burst forth and the completion of the spell
formed its body into a golem of the same man he’d assaulted
and in a reversal that surprised me even there in hell
The second reached into the hole in his shattered head
and with fierce tugging pulled away his skin
just as any reptile will its worn skin shed
he shed his human flesh and flashed a lizard’s grin
And to Eliot I said what did your proverb mean
that transformation proceeds from within
he said whether your shell be dirty or clean
the inner man will in the end always be seen
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
Tuesday, November 13, 2007
202 : 10/29/98 : Reptiles (Canto 24)
When we had made our way to the fallen bridge
to which our burdened friend had alluded
And we stood on the edge of the treacherous ridge
I said I think we may have been deluded
But T.S. just said Excelsior!
And started down along the rubble where a great arch once was rooted
Over massive broken rocks we clambered for
what seemed like hours and when we hit
The bottom I saw we had another nasty climb in store
Halfway up I said I’ve had it
I felt like my lungs were gonna pop
but my guide said onward up out of this pit
and on to the next you cannot stop
this thing that you’ve begun now
and I said I’ll push until I drop
And so I put my shoulder back to the plow
and managed to make the climb
and when we saw what waited for us next I said, wow,
I ain’t never seen so many reptiles at one time
Lizards, snakes, an evil looking turtle or two
A sea of forest, emerald teal and lime
And my guide said here’s a pretty specimen for you
pointing out a man positively swarming with snakes
who seeing our attention said I’ll make you rue
the day you two day-tripping flakes
decided to intrude upon my misery
And Eliot said hold on man this won’t take
a minute and heaven knows your time is free
tell our friend here how you came to this estate
and no sooner said than we’ll just be
along our way we’ve got a date
to keep, you see with the dark prince
it wouldn’t do now would it to be late
and the man gave a snarl that made me wince
and said what’s really to tell
I killed and stole and destroyed and since
I died unrepentant I wound up in hell
Well that’s not such a great story
is it friend but mark this well
I tell you true I’m still not sorry
for the evil that I’ve done
I stalked my fellow man like quarry
I stole for sport and killed for fun
I’m a human monster and there’s many
more down here I’m not the only one
And T.S. said now see do you still think there’s any
question the divine will is just
here’s a man who would kill you for a penny
Can’t you see that sometimes evil must
simply be forced to desist
ashes to ashes kid dust to dust
there must be a place for those who insist
on making things so black
nut I said couldn’t He just make them cease to exist?
‘Cause I have to say this eternity on the rack
Seems more malice than divine
seems a lot like payback
And I’m sorry if I’ve crossed the line
But I question if His justice is the same as mine
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
to which our burdened friend had alluded
And we stood on the edge of the treacherous ridge
I said I think we may have been deluded
But T.S. just said Excelsior!
And started down along the rubble where a great arch once was rooted
Over massive broken rocks we clambered for
what seemed like hours and when we hit
The bottom I saw we had another nasty climb in store
Halfway up I said I’ve had it
I felt like my lungs were gonna pop
but my guide said onward up out of this pit
and on to the next you cannot stop
this thing that you’ve begun now
and I said I’ll push until I drop
And so I put my shoulder back to the plow
and managed to make the climb
and when we saw what waited for us next I said, wow,
I ain’t never seen so many reptiles at one time
Lizards, snakes, an evil looking turtle or two
A sea of forest, emerald teal and lime
And my guide said here’s a pretty specimen for you
pointing out a man positively swarming with snakes
who seeing our attention said I’ll make you rue
the day you two day-tripping flakes
decided to intrude upon my misery
And Eliot said hold on man this won’t take
a minute and heaven knows your time is free
tell our friend here how you came to this estate
and no sooner said than we’ll just be
along our way we’ve got a date
to keep, you see with the dark prince
it wouldn’t do now would it to be late
and the man gave a snarl that made me wince
and said what’s really to tell
I killed and stole and destroyed and since
I died unrepentant I wound up in hell
Well that’s not such a great story
is it friend but mark this well
I tell you true I’m still not sorry
for the evil that I’ve done
I stalked my fellow man like quarry
I stole for sport and killed for fun
I’m a human monster and there’s many
more down here I’m not the only one
And T.S. said now see do you still think there’s any
question the divine will is just
here’s a man who would kill you for a penny
Can’t you see that sometimes evil must
simply be forced to desist
ashes to ashes kid dust to dust
there must be a place for those who insist
on making things so black
nut I said couldn’t He just make them cease to exist?
‘Cause I have to say this eternity on the rack
Seems more malice than divine
seems a lot like payback
And I’m sorry if I’ve crossed the line
But I question if His justice is the same as mine
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
Monday, November 12, 2007
201 : 10/28/98 : Hypocrites (Canto 23)
Behind us was a ruckus, T.S. said ho showtime
We scrambled back up on our feet
A demon shouted hey you mortal slime
We made a swift retreat
But soon as we came up to the cliff’s brink
I said I think they’ve got us beat
But my guardian quick as a wink
Threw me over his shoulder
And slid down into the next sink
We took refuge behind a boulder
And looked up to see our demons pause
And seeing their trail had grown colder
Than they could follow they gave up their cause
And as they turned back we went on
T.S. said they were held to their own circle by the laws
That God had set down a very long
time ago, and soon we heard a loud,
raucous chorus of sighs and wails, and soon we came upon
A suffering and circling crowd
They were laden down with fearsome stones
These hypocrites carry the weight of all they vowed
in Judgment against their fellows and now they moan
For by the same sins they used to burden others
They stored up these weights when they were alone
The poet said, and circle eternally cheek to jowl one to another
Mind this lesson and never make haste
To add to the yoke of their brother
And one so burdened said who are these two so chaste
that they carry nothing at all
As they pass through the endless waste
Of all we poor casualties of the fall
I said well I’m a tourist here
But while you take a turn with you don’t take it for gall
If I ask you what brought you so near
to the center of hell’s great wheel
And he said I was one chosen to steer
the ship of state, to guide it’s keel
through rocky shoals in troubled waters
an office I rose to through influence and appeal
A thousand smiles and handshakes and kisses for the sons and daughters
But I had only evil and lust for power in my heart
And for power turned a blind eye to the slaughter
of innocents and played an instrumental part
In making my nation worse and weaker
That’s the politician’s special art
And he said to T.S. you and this mortal seeker
Go ahead and ask around
we’re all pretty much the same but I hear it’s even bleaker
upstairs, hypocrites every day even more abound
Just then we came upon a figure who
was staked out on the ground
And trod on by all who passed through
that circle of punishment
And our new companion said this one may be known to you
The father of politicians the statesman who sent
An innocent man to be staked to a tree
Simply because it was expedient
And T.S. said that’s sure a sight to see
but tell us friend ‘cause our’ schedule’s tight
Where’s the nearest bridge to the next circle of misery
He said the bridges are all down but bear to the right
And you’ll come upon a lowland
Where if you’re agile you just might
find the passage you demand
And that’s the best that I can say
And T.S. said well now don’t just stand
there we must be on our way
We gotta get through the rest of hell by the end of the day
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
We scrambled back up on our feet
A demon shouted hey you mortal slime
We made a swift retreat
But soon as we came up to the cliff’s brink
I said I think they’ve got us beat
But my guardian quick as a wink
Threw me over his shoulder
And slid down into the next sink
We took refuge behind a boulder
And looked up to see our demons pause
And seeing their trail had grown colder
Than they could follow they gave up their cause
And as they turned back we went on
T.S. said they were held to their own circle by the laws
That God had set down a very long
time ago, and soon we heard a loud,
raucous chorus of sighs and wails, and soon we came upon
A suffering and circling crowd
They were laden down with fearsome stones
These hypocrites carry the weight of all they vowed
in Judgment against their fellows and now they moan
For by the same sins they used to burden others
They stored up these weights when they were alone
The poet said, and circle eternally cheek to jowl one to another
Mind this lesson and never make haste
To add to the yoke of their brother
And one so burdened said who are these two so chaste
that they carry nothing at all
As they pass through the endless waste
Of all we poor casualties of the fall
I said well I’m a tourist here
But while you take a turn with you don’t take it for gall
If I ask you what brought you so near
to the center of hell’s great wheel
And he said I was one chosen to steer
the ship of state, to guide it’s keel
through rocky shoals in troubled waters
an office I rose to through influence and appeal
A thousand smiles and handshakes and kisses for the sons and daughters
But I had only evil and lust for power in my heart
And for power turned a blind eye to the slaughter
of innocents and played an instrumental part
In making my nation worse and weaker
That’s the politician’s special art
And he said to T.S. you and this mortal seeker
Go ahead and ask around
we’re all pretty much the same but I hear it’s even bleaker
upstairs, hypocrites every day even more abound
Just then we came upon a figure who
was staked out on the ground
And trod on by all who passed through
that circle of punishment
And our new companion said this one may be known to you
The father of politicians the statesman who sent
An innocent man to be staked to a tree
Simply because it was expedient
And T.S. said that’s sure a sight to see
but tell us friend ‘cause our’ schedule’s tight
Where’s the nearest bridge to the next circle of misery
He said the bridges are all down but bear to the right
And you’ll come upon a lowland
Where if you’re agile you just might
find the passage you demand
And that’s the best that I can say
And T.S. said well now don’t just stand
there we must be on our way
We gotta get through the rest of hell by the end of the day
This song is part of a series loosely based on Dante's Inferno. You can read an essay about this series here. You can read a more general explanation of the origin of these lyrics here
Weekly status, now with continuity tracking
I explained my original intentions behind the weekly status report here. I've decided to add an additional marker that indicates how long a string of songs I've written without missing a day during the ongoing project. By way of example, today's status:
926 : 1 ?
Explanation
Icons indicate if I'm running a song backlog and if so how much.
926 : 1 Songs written in the current project : Songs written without missing a day
(Whenever I'm running a backlog the latter number will be zero)
The question mark links to this explanation. I'd like to say that I've only written one song without missing a day because I purposely skipped a day to officially start the public count. But that would be a lie. Although I've been avoiding serious backlogs, I'm still missing a lot more days than I'm satisfied with. As usual, increasing the amount of status data I'm publishing is an attempt to motivate myself to better performance.
Including the 1,001 songs written in the original project (the one I'm currently blogging) I'm nearing 2,000 daily songs written so far.
926 : 1 ?
Explanation
Icons indicate if I'm running a song backlog and if so how much.
926 : 1 Songs written in the current project : Songs written without missing a day
(Whenever I'm running a backlog the latter number will be zero)
The question mark links to this explanation. I'd like to say that I've only written one song without missing a day because I purposely skipped a day to officially start the public count. But that would be a lie. Although I've been avoiding serious backlogs, I'm still missing a lot more days than I'm satisfied with. As usual, increasing the amount of status data I'm publishing is an attempt to motivate myself to better performance.
Including the 1,001 songs written in the original project (the one I'm currently blogging) I'm nearing 2,000 daily songs written so far.
Monday, November 05, 2007
It Pours
I generally eschew status reports because I reckon not a whole lot of people, in the scheme of things, are reading, and those that do know me well enough to drop me a line if they really want to know what's going on.
Well, what's been going on the last few weeks is basically just one expletive deleted thing after another, related to getting slammed by work with my main money gig, the whole family getting sick, my spouse traveling for work now (making me sole childcare provider for a few days)... It's been one of those months, now bleeding into the next one.
BUT. Barring further unforeseen adversity expect, pretty soon, resumed song of the day posting (hoping to quickly wrap up the Inferno), a thrilling added feature to the weekly status dashboard (I know, you didn't think it could get any more exciting. Let the anticipation overwhelm the fear...), a word about my exciting, recently restarted/recreated and immediately stalled by the aforementioned unexciting personal life issues other music weblog project, Phree Musique, and absolutely no updates about my secret weblog that I won't ever mention again so don't ask about it.
On November 12th, I'd say.
Well, what's been going on the last few weeks is basically just one expletive deleted thing after another, related to getting slammed by work with my main money gig, the whole family getting sick, my spouse traveling for work now (making me sole childcare provider for a few days)... It's been one of those months, now bleeding into the next one.
BUT. Barring further unforeseen adversity expect, pretty soon, resumed song of the day posting (hoping to quickly wrap up the Inferno), a thrilling added feature to the weekly status dashboard (I know, you didn't think it could get any more exciting. Let the anticipation overwhelm the fear...), a word about my exciting, recently restarted/recreated and immediately stalled by the aforementioned unexciting personal life issues other music weblog project, Phree Musique, and absolutely no updates about my secret weblog that I won't ever mention again so don't ask about it.
On November 12th, I'd say.
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